MARIGOLD & RYE

Breakfast-cafe ad — the dynamic-camera pass

NEW: orbit · crane-down · rising spiral 7 of 8 shots in hand
You were right that the last pass was all forward dollies — which text-to-video does anyway, so the 3D build bought nothing. These three are moves a prompt cannot hold: a true orbit, a continuous crane down into a macro, and a rising spiral. The rejected hero is replaced.

NEW HERO — rising spiral, 10s

Climbs from water level around the fountain toward the glass roof, tilting down over the courtyard. It starts inside the courtyard — the old one drove at a brick wall and the archway materialised out of nowhere. No reveal to get wrong.

NEW — crane down into the food

One unbroken descent from ceiling height into a macro across the plate — syrup pouring, butter slumping, blackberries. The move a prompt turns into a zoom.

NEW — orbit around the couple

The camera circles the table while the pair stay centred and the room rotates behind them. Other diners pass through the foreground, which is what a real cafe dolly looks like.

NEW — orbit around the espresso machine

Circles the machine while it stays centred. Checked the barista's hands at full resolution — five fingers, correct joints, real grip on the knob and the steam wand — and the espresso falls as two streams, which is what a double spout actually does.

Your four accepted shots

Opening — window bar

6s

Through the door

6s

Hall wide

6s

Bakery counter

6s · accepted with the smudgy prices

Status

ShotMoveState
Window barlateral glideaccepted
Through doorpush inaccepted
Hall wideforward dollyaccepted
Bakery countertrack alongaccepted
Atriumrising spiralnew — your call
Foodcrane down to macronew — your call
Coupleorbitnew — your call
Espressoorbitstill generating

~145 of 350 credits. Nothing assembled yet — no music, no end card, no grade; these are raw generations so you can judge the camera and catch mistakes. Once the espresso lands I'll cut the 50 seconds, add sound design and the end card, and run the full QA pass.