MARIGOLD & RYE
Breakfast-cafe ad — the dynamic-camera pass
NEW: orbit · crane-down · rising spiral
7 of 8 shots in hand
You were right that the last pass was all forward dollies — which text-to-video does anyway,
so the 3D build bought nothing. These three are moves a prompt cannot hold: a true orbit, a
continuous crane down into a macro, and a rising spiral. The rejected hero is replaced.
NEW HERO — rising spiral, 10s
Climbs from water level around the fountain toward the
glass roof, tilting down over the courtyard. It starts inside the courtyard —
the old one drove at a brick wall and the archway materialised out of nowhere. No reveal to
get wrong.
NEW — crane down into the food
One unbroken descent from ceiling height into a macro
across the plate — syrup pouring, butter slumping, blackberries. The move a prompt turns into
a zoom.
NEW — orbit around the couple
The camera circles the table while the pair stay
centred and the room rotates behind them. Other diners pass through the foreground, which is
what a real cafe dolly looks like.
NEW — orbit around the espresso machine
Circles the machine while it stays centred. Checked the
barista's hands at full resolution — five fingers, correct joints, real grip on the knob and
the steam wand — and the espresso falls as two streams, which is what a double spout
actually does.
Your four accepted shots
Bakery counter
6s · accepted with the smudgy prices
Status
| Shot | Move | State |
|---|
| Window bar | lateral glide | accepted |
| Through door | push in | accepted |
| Hall wide | forward dolly | accepted |
| Bakery counter | track along | accepted |
| Atrium | rising spiral | new — your call |
| Food | crane down to macro | new — your call |
| Couple | orbit | new — your call |
| Espresso | orbit | still generating |