All 9 shots

Raw generations. No cut, no grade, no sound, no end card.

The thing to judge first: it is the same cafe in every shot — same brick, same timber, same sun direction. That is what broke last time. The light is also doing the work now: the windows are allowed to blow out and the room falls into warm shadow, instead of everything being lifted flat.

Two things I can see wrong

1. The counter shot has gibberish chalk text again. I did not ask for it this time — a bake-shop counter just implies chalk signs, so it wrote some. Fix is to name the boards as blank, or frame them out.

2. The atrium hero does not read as the courtyard. It came back as more cafe with a fountain in it, not the tall brick-and-glass-roof space that was meant to be the payoff. The camera move is right; the room is not.

Two things that were broken and are now fixed

The floating jug is gone — the plate sits alone and only the light moves. And the couple look at each other, mid-conversation, instead of presenting to the camera.

Every shot

1 — Window bar

lateral track

2 — Pastry counter

crane down + track

3 — Espresso machine

orbit

4 — Coffee beans

crane down to macro

5 — Breakfast plate

crane down to macro · jug fixed

6 — The couple

orbit

7 — Counter skim

lens at counter height · chalk text

8 — Communal table

rise between the pendants

9 — Atrium

rising spiral · wrong room

~102 of 350 credits. Nothing assembled — these are raw so you can judge the camera and catch mistakes before I cut them. Audio needs the ElevenLabs key, which is now working again.